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I need help by ~Why-is-it-always-me:iconWhy-is-it-always-me:



I would never kill myself over a guy,
unless it was from a broken heart,
I'd like to get myself out of this mess,
can someone lead me out of the dark.

I need a helping hand,
a shoulder to cry on,
somebody that i can actualy rely on.

You've hurt me so much,
sent me out the room crying,
To my friends i said nothing,
they knew i was lying.

This love dosent feel right,
but I cant let you go,
You're my first true love,
yet how do I know.

This isn't worth my blood,
this isn't worth a tear,
but both will flow,
that's what I fear.

I know that you love me,
I've heard it a thousand time,
but are your repeated truths forming into lies.

I cant eat,
I cant sleep,
Cause I'm thinking of you,
Well in the end I dont know what to do.
©2004-2008 ~Why-is-it-always-me
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Well i wrote this poem last night, it's mostly what I'm feeling and going through, I'm not sure if I like it though.

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=shadowed-angel:iconshadowed-angel: Sep 29, 2004, 5:39:15 PM
obviously you dont wish to die over a guy. that is teh smartest thing, go with it. Tears will come naturally, that is the best way to ease out of it. You are already knowing that it wont last. You should be the one to stop it, because it isnt love if you're already saying that its almost over. getting through ti to be together again, that can kinda be love. he's you're first boyfriend, no one likes loosing them, but shit happens. You'll have heaps more guys at your feet. one of tehm may actually be the real thing...who knows?

great work hun:hug:

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~mysticsilverstar:iconmysticsilverstar: Sep 30, 2004, 3:06:09 AM
*remembers when she lost her first boyfriend* ^.^ couldn't have survived without my frens...and you know what? he told me that he couldn't go out with a gurl who's dad doesn't trust her...thinking back...i wondered why i didn't just yell at him >.< but we seldom talk now...he turned out to be kinda jerky...guy's change imogen, sometimes for good sometimes for the bad...we all change...and we have to look deep within our heart to know what to do even though it could get messy or it may hurt. things usually get worse before they get better...we can't tell you what to do. however, we can and will give you all our support and love...:hug:

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~Blooming:iconBlooming: Sep 30, 2004, 4:25:16 AM
very cool! i love the rhyming! crying and lying!

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Well she was my catatonic sex toy, love-joy diver
She went down down down there into the sea
Yeah she went down down down there, down there for me right on!
~Why-is-it-always-me:iconWhy-is-it-always-me: Oct 1, 2004, 6:03:18 AM
thnx ashley, i love you all so much for your support -hugges all-